I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 19 June 2020
Setting Description
Peacefully I sit down beneath the towering tree. It’s long slender branches reaching over me.The bright green grass surrounds me coated in autumn leaves. I can feel the mud squish under my feet and the crunch of leaves as I walk across the grass. I can hear the birds chirping and the faint sound of cars in the distance. I can hear kids running and thumping in the gym.
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