Sitting at the front of the school
The smell of fresh air and wind in my face. The breeze lightly blew the branches of the tall trees caving in the school driveway. Sitting at the front of the school I felt the hard brick wall piercing my bare legs. The sound of birds chirping and branches blowing was music to my ears but cars passing drowned the noise out and focussed my attention on people chatting around me. The sun was hidden by the grey thick clouds but the air still felt warm. Lost in my thoughts, the bright blue of the school distracted me and brought me back to earth. My eyes wandered and shortly landed on a grey car with a man in a police uniform emerging from it. A van pulls in, guys run past and shortly we head back through the long cave like driveway. On the way Nevaeh found a piece of a fanta box and she put it on her shoe. Then Zahrn found a gumboot and threw it at Nevaeh. Finally, when we arrived at class I took a seat at my desk and thought about writing my draft.
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